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Translation-Draft two
TV Program
It’s important to choose TV programs carefully. Although TV is the most important channel to offer information and entertainments to us, it may have some disadvantages. Some programs which are full of violent and lust are bad influence for adolescents. And spending much time watching TV will harm eyesight. Therefore, we should choose TV programs which are beneficial. The most important thing is that we can't be a couch potato.
Computer
Computers play an important role in our daily life. They can help students hand in homework rapidly. And they help people deliver information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, you are sure to remind yourself. Don’t sit too long in front of the computer. Most of parents don’t like their kids to depend on computers. Especially discussion of bulletin board is waste of time.
Translation
TV Program
It’s important to choose TV programs carefully. Although TV is the most important channel to offer information and entertainments to us, it may be some disadvantages. Some programs which are violent and lust are not good influence for adolescents. And spending much time watching TV can harm eyesight. Therefore, we should choose TV programs which are beneficial. The most important thing is that we can't be couch potato.
Computer
Computers play an important role in our dairy life. They can help students hand in homework rapidly. And they help people deliver information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, you are sure to remind yourself. Don’t sit too long in front of the computer. Most of parents don’t like their kids to depend on computers. Especially discussion of bulletin board is waste of time.
A Horrible Thing-Draft two
There are four little boys playing in the park. One of them is called Jack who is mischievous. He thinks that it is fun to climb a tree,so he decides to climb the tree which is next to the ceramic water jar. And he doesn’t pay attention while climbing it. Suddenly, Jack falls down carelessly into the jar which is not only large but deep. Everyone is frightened and nervous. They don’t know how to do it. At that time, two of them think that they can carry the stone to break the jar to save him. So they carry the stone quickly. And they throw the stone at the jar. Fortunately, the jar is broken and Jack is saved successfully. What a happy ending .From then on, Jack swears that he won’t do it again because it is such a horrible experience!
A Horrible Thing-Draft one
There are four little boys playing in the park. One of them is called Jack who is mischievous. He thinks that it is fun to climb the tree, which is next to the ceramic water jar. So he doesn’t think too much. Suddenly, Jack falls off carelessly the jar which is not only large but high. Everyone is frightened and nervous. And they don’t know what to do. At that time, two of them think that they can carry the stone to break the jar to save him. So they carry the stone quickly. And they throw the stone at the jar. Fortunately, the jar is broken and Jack is saved successfully. What a happy ending .From then on, Jack swears that he won’t do it again because it is such a horrible experience!
Tips for staying healthy-Draft Two
There are some tips for staying healthy. First of all, you must eat less junk food. Because it will make you be fat. Second, you should exercise at least three times a week. It may help you to stay healthy and lose weights. In addition, you can keep in good mood for staying healthy. For example, listening to music, reading books or doing anything you like are good ways.Finally , smoking is a harmful thing for your body. If you smoke often, you’ll get a lung cancer. In conclusion, physical health and mental health are very important, both of them we can't ignore it.