Computers-draft two
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They have already been widely used at home as well as in industries such as washing machines, TV sets and DVD players. Besides, we can not only get a large amount of information from all over the world in a short time through the computer network but also listen to music, watch films, have a chat, and so on. Therefore, we cannot do without them in our daily lives.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. First, it’s convenient for everybody to get the latest information like current news. Second, we can have fun by playing games, watching films and listening to music. Finally, it helps us save a lot of time. For example, we can purchase merchandise and even make reservations without going out. Computers not only make us feel relaxed but help our lives become easier. Consequently, I like computers very much.
posted by GIGI @ 9:07 PM
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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They have already been widely used at home as well as in industries, such as washing machines, TV sets and DVD players. Besides, we can not only get a large amount of information from all over the world in a short time through the computer network but also listen to music, watch films, have a chat, and so on. Therefore, we cannot do without them in our daily lives.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. First, it’s convenient for me to get the latest information like current news. Second, I can have fun by playing games, watching films and listening to music. Finally, it helps me save a lot of time. For example, I can purchase merchandise and even make reservations without going out. Computers not only make me feel relaxed but help my life become easier. Consequently, I like computers very much.
* 第二段出現嚴重錯誤:
既然第二段是描述"我"個人，就應該是以我為中心來描述，人稱要一致。
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