chocola's writing

Thursday, January 18, 2007

Learning English-Draft Two

English has been a global language now. I think English is useful,so learning English is very important. First, it can help us communicate with foreigners and make more alien friends. Second, when we go traveling, we can communicate with everyone around the world by speaking English. It not only reduces the distance between one country and another country but helps us understand their cultures. Third, it opens our mind as we admire different scenery and cultures. Furthermore, the harder we learn English, the more working opportunities we can get. For example, we’ll be able to get a higher position of a company. In a word, we can benefit a lot from learning English,and it also makes our lives easier.

My Bedroom-Draft Two

My bedroom is very small, but very clean. When you walk into the room, the computer which makes my life convenient is on the right of the door, next to my desk. There are a clock and calendar over the desk .Besides, several posters are also on the wall. The window that is dirty is on the right wall. And my old bed which is under the window is between my desk and the window. There are two closets in front of the door. And they are lined with the bookcase. In conclusion, although it is not big, I bet you will like this room very much.

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Learning English-Draft One

English has been a global language now, it makes our lives easier. I think English is useful. First, we can communicate with foreigners or make alien friends. It not only reduces the distance between us but helps us understand their cultures Second, when we go traveling, we can communicate with everyone around the world by speaking English . Furthermore, it opens our mind as we admire different scenery and cultures. Third, the harder we learn English , the more opportunities we can get. For example, we’ll be able to get a higher position of a company. In a word, we can benefit a lot from learning English. So learning English is very important.

Tuesday, January 09, 2007

My Bedroom-Draft One

My bedroom is very small, but it is very clean. When you walk into the door, the computer which can let us convenient is on the right of the door, next to my desk. There is a clock over the desk .The window that is dirty on the right wall. And my bed which is under the window is between my desk and the window. The closet is in front of the door. And it is lined with the bookcase. In conclusion, although it is not big, I believe you also like this room very much.

Tuesday, January 02, 2007

An Embarrassing Experience-Draft Two

Many people had embarrassing experiences, and so did I. One day, I was so bored that I decided to call my friend to talk about something. Therefore, I just was watching TV, making the phone call. However, I didn't notice that I dialed the wrong number. Suddenly, a stranger answered. I was surprised. And I didn’t know what to do. So I hung up the phone right away. At that moment, my heart beat quickly. Besides, my face became red. From then on, I wouldn't do anything when I called someone. I bet I won't make the same mistake again.