A Dream I Had - Draft Two
I had a strange but wonderful dream several weeks ago. In my dream, I opened a mysterious book unwittingly, getting the amazing magic power. The wizardry enabled me to fly in the sky and to pass through the time. Furthermore, it also gave me three wishes which I wanted. But I had to obey the book’s direction to rule the world. It was difficult for me to make the decision. When I was considering its demands, an unknown man appeared. He told me that the book was embodiment of the evil. If I promised him, I would be cursed and my soul would be its slave forever. Even so, I still responded the evil owing to three wishes. Since then, I never awaked until a handsome prince defeated the evil and saved me with a kiss. Soon, we fell in love and I consented to get married to him. From then on, we led a happy life in the castle. Dreams can not only make us give the rein to our imagination but also experience a variety of dreamland. Therefore, I like to have dreams except for nightmares!

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I had a strange but wonderful dream several weeks ago. In my dream, I opened a mysterious book unwittingly and got the amazing magic power. The wizardry enabled me to fly in the sky and to pass through the time. Furthermore, it also gave me three wishes which I wanted. But I had to obey the direction of the book to rule the world. It was difficult for me to make the decision. When I was considering its demands, an unknown man appeared. He told me that the book was embodiment of the evil. If I promised him, I would be cursed and my soul would be its slave forever. Even so, I still agreed with the evil owing to the attraction of the three wishes. Since then, I fell asleep unconciously until a handsome prince defeated the evil and saved me with a kiss. Soon, we fell in love and I consented to get married to him. From then on, we led a happy life in the castle. Dreams can not only make us give the rein to our imagination but also experience a variety of dreamland. Therefore, I like to have dreams except for nightmares!
*What was the direction that made you never awake?
*Even so, I still responded the evil owing to three wishes. Since then, I never awaked.
-> 中間似乎省略過多敘述,造成上下文不太連貫。
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