chocola's writing

Monday, January 14, 2008

pop music and classical music - Draft One

Pop music and classical music are very different. First of all, most young people mainly listen to pop music; however, classical music is popular with middle-aged people. Second, pop music is broadcasted in occasions filled with excitement like parties, concerts or pubs, whereas classical music is proper for quiet places, for example, fabulous restaurants or coffee stores. Third, pop music makes listeners excited and high-spirited, on the other hand, classical music can make us relax and stay calm. Even though pop music and classical music are totally different, both of them are pleasant music.

Learning English-Draft Two

It is essential to learn English for everyone because English has become a global language around the world. I think learning English is beneficial to you. To begin with, you can get working opportunities easily if you can speak English fluently. For instance, you will be able to get a higher position of a company. Secondly, when you take a trip to some foreign countries, you can communicate with everyone in English. In other words, you have no obstacle to communication; furthermore, you can fit with their cultures easily as well. Thirdly, when you enroll a university, you ought to be good enough at English to fully understand books originally written in English. Finally, you can make friends with foreigners. It not only makes you expand your interpersonal relations but also broaden your horizons. Consequently, it is worthwhile to learning English.

Friday, January 04, 2008

Learning English-Draft One

It is essential to learn English for everyone because English has become a global language around the world. I think learning English is beneficial to you. First of all, you can get working opportunities easily if you can speak English fluently. For instance, you’ll be able to get a higher position of a company. Next, when you take a trip to some foreign countries, you can communicate with everyone in English. In other words, you have no obstacle to communication; you can fit with their cultures easily as well. Finally, you can make friends with foreigners. It not only makes you expand your interpersonal relations but also broaden your horizons. Therefore, it is worthwhile to learning English.