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Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Learning English-Draft One

English has been a global language now, it makes our lives easier. I think English is useful. First, we can communicate with foreigners or make alien friends. It not only reduces the distance between us but helps us understand their cultures Second, when we go traveling, we can communicate with everyone around the world by speaking English . Furthermore, it opens our mind as we admire different scenery and cultures. Third, the harder we learn English , the more opportunities we can get. For example, we’ll be able to get a higher position of a company. In a word, we can benefit a lot from learning English. So learning English is very important.

4 Comments:

Blogger 郭包子 said...

English has been a global language now, 這裡可以句號了吧?
It not only reduces the distance between us but helps us understand their cultures 嘿嘿~這一句你忘了句號囉!

8:04 PM  
Blogger 飛奇 said...

"I think English is useful. "
"So learning English is very important."
我想這兩句要有連貫性會比較喔~~

12:29 AM  
Blogger :V,瀞 ”婷* said...

寫的不錯!!
first second third可以做一下變化

5:49 AM  
Blogger 楊文琳 said...

Second前面沒逗號
First可以變化依下 First of all,
Third也可以變成In addition,

7:58 PM  

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