pop music and classical music - Draft One

Pop music and classical music are very different. First of all, most young people mainly listen to pop music; however, classical music is popular with middle-aged people. Second, pop music is broadcasted in occasions filled with excitement like parties, concerts or pubs, whereas classical music is proper for quiet places, for example, fabulous restaurants or coffee stores. Third, pop music makes listeners excited and high-spirited, on the other hand, classical music can make us relax and stay calm. Even though pop music and classical music are totally different, both of them are pleasant music.

Learning English-Draft Two

It is essential to learn English for everyone because English has become a global language around the world. I think learning English is beneficial to you. To begin with, you can get working opportunities easily if you can speak English fluently. For instance, you will be able to get a higher position of a company. Secondly, when you take a trip to some foreign countries, you can communicate with everyone in English. In other words, you have no obstacle to communication; furthermore, you can fit with their cultures easily as well. Thirdly, when you enroll a university, you ought to be good enough at English to fully understand books originally written in English. Finally, you can make friends with foreigners. It not only makes you expand your interpersonal relations but also broaden your horizons. Consequently, it is worthwhile to learning English.

Learning English-Draft One

It is essential to learn English for everyone because English has become a global language around the world. I think learning English is beneficial to you. First of all, you can get working opportunities easily if you can speak English fluently. For instance, you’ll be able to get a higher position of a company. Next, when you take a trip to some foreign countries, you can communicate with everyone in English. In other words, you have no obstacle to communication; you can fit with their cultures easily as well. Finally, you can make friends with foreigners. It not only makes you expand your interpersonal relations but also broaden your horizons. Therefore, it is worthwhile to learning English.

An Unforgettable Day-Draft Two

I had an unforgettable memory. It was in my first year’s athletic meeting that I was assigned to take part in the 200m race. Therefore, before my race, I not only practiced running with my friends but asked the teacher how to perfect my skills. On that day, nevertheless, the weather was very cold. I was so nervous that I couldn't help but shudder. Fortunately, my friends encouraged me and told me to take it easy ,so I gradually became more confident. When the competition began, I was afraid that I wouldn’t be able to catch up with others. As a consequence, I put my best foot forward to complete the race. At last, I reached the finishing line with my firm endurance and all my friends responded with warm applause. To my surprise, I got a third place. I was too astonished to believe the truth. However, I was satisfied with the result because my effort did pay off. It was such a wonderful day that I would never forget.

An Unforgettable Day-Draft One

I had an unforgettable memory. It was in my first year’s athletic meeting that I was assigned to take part in the 200m race. Therefore, before my race, I not only practiced running with my friends but asked the teacher how to perfect my skills. On that day, nevertheless, the weather was very cold. I was very nervous and my heart beat violently. Fortunately, my friends encouraged me and told me to take it easy so I gradually became more confident. When the competition began, I was afraid that I wouldn’t be able to catch up with others. As a consequence, I put my best foot forward to complete the game. At last, I reached the finishing line with my firm endurance and all my friends responded with warm applause. Originally I thought I didn’t do a good job. To my surprise, I got a third place. I was too astonished to believe the truth. However, I was satisfied with the result because my effort did pay off. I t was such a wonderful that I would never forget.

A Dream I Had - Draft Two

I had a strange but wonderful dream several weeks ago. In my dream, I opened a mysterious book unwittingly, getting the amazing magic power. The wizardry enabled me to fly in the sky and to pass through the time. Furthermore, it also gave me three wishes which I wanted. But I had to obey the book’s direction to rule the world. It was difficult for me to make the decision. When I was considering its demands, an unknown man appeared. He told me that the book was embodiment of the evil. If I promised him, I would be cursed and my soul would be its slave forever. Even so, I still responded the evil owing to three wishes. Since then, I never awaked until a handsome prince defeated the evil and saved me with a kiss. Soon, we fell in love and I consented to get married to him. From then on, we led a happy life in the castle. Dreams can not only make us give the rein to our imagination but also experience a variety of dreamland. Therefore, I like to have dreams except for nightmares!

A Dream I Had - Draft One

I had a strange and wonderful dream several weeks ago. In my dream, I opened a mysterious book unwittingly, getting the amazing magic power. The wizardry enabled me to fly in the sky and to pass through the time. Furthermore, it also gave me three wishes what I wanted. But I had to obey the book’s direction to rule the world. It was difficult for me to make the decision. When I was considering its demands, an unknown man appeared. He told me that the book was embodiment of the evil. If I promised him, I would be cursed and my soul would be its slave forever. Even so, I still responded the evil owing to three wishes. From then on, I never awaked until a handsome prince defeated the evil and saved me with a kiss. Soon, we fell in love and I consented to get married to him. From then on, we led a happy life in the castle. Dreams can not only make us give the rein to our imagination but also experience a variety of dreamland. Therefore, I like to have dreams except for nightmares!

Making Decisions-draft two

Growing up means making my own decisions. That means I have to deal with my own affairs. While I was young, my family prepared everything for me. However, when I grow up, I can rely on others no more. Furthermore, I should always ”look before I leap”. Consequently, I ought to learn making my own decisions.

The hardest decision that I ever made was to major in foreign languages or commercial subjects in my senior high. Though I have a hard time learning Accounting and Economics, I am still interested in them, and I need to overcome the difficulty of learning them. Therefore, after considering it over and over again, I make up my mind to major in Accounting and Economics. Although understanding them clearly is not an easy task, I bet I won’t give it up.