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Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Autobiography-1-Draft two

I am Yu-Fang Huang, a seventeen-year-old girl from Tainan city. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. There are four people in my family. My father is a simple and responsible person. My mother, a housewife, is a good cook. My parents couldn’t teach strictly for me. So I can determine anything what I want except for villainy. My brother is a college student. He lives in Taipei now. I like the warm and comfortable feeling of my family. I must say I am lucky enough to grow in such a great home.

I like to do exercise, like playing basketball, going swimming and so on. I sometimes play basketball with my friends in the nearby park on weekends. These exercises not only make me keep staying healthy but also losing weights. Besides, I also like to watch TV about movie channels and listen to music including English songs. Because they are not only fun but help my listening and speaking skills. Therefore, doing exercise and listening to music is my favorite hobby.


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Blogger gimliong said...

I am Yu-Fang Huang, a seventeen-year-old girl from Tainan city. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. There are four people in my family. My father is a simple and responsible person. My mother, a housewife, is a good cook. My parents don't teach me strictly. Therefore, I always remind myself that I need to behave myself. My brother is a college student, and he lives in Taipei now. I like my warm and comfortable family. It is certain that I am lucky enough to grow in such a great family.

I like to do exercise, like playing basketball, going swimming and so on. I sometimes play basketball with my friends in the nearby park on weekends. The exercise make me not only keep staying healthy but also lose weight. Besides, I am fond of watching TV about movies and listening to music, including English songs. Because they are full of fun and help my listening and speaking skills. Therefore, doing exercise and listening to music are my favorite hobbies, and it indeed helps me a lot.



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