An Embarrassing Experience-Draft One
Many people had embarrassing experiences, and so did I. One day, I wanted to call my friend. At that time, I was watching TV. Therefore, I dial the wrong number. But I didn’t know. Suddenly, a stranger spoke. I was surprised. And I didn’t know what to do. So I hung up the phone right away. At the moment, my heart beat quickly. Besides, my face became red. From then on, I didn’t do other thing when I called someone. I won’t make the same mistake again.

3 Comments:
other thing 建議作複數的型態~~
(我不知道是不是要每個人每篇都要看耶= =)
我覺得整個很順~!!
Suddenly, a stranger spoke.
要強調正在說是不是改成
Suddenly, a stranger was speaking.
會比較好一點?
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